Help me with my intro please!!?

Yes, your story is really interesting. For the blanks for names that you haven't thought of yet, I would suggest you to search a word (for example, for the forest, you want it to be dark) so you could search the word, "dark" in a Latin dictionary, which is "acerbus", and change it a bit, so maybe it could be the Acerbian Forest or something. Good luck on your story!